Blood
Soak me in your red
Give me fire, power, beauty and love
Fill me in with your anger
Blood
Inject me with your might
Blood
Empower me by your colour
Let me drink you in
By your red give me strength
Burn me and tear me apart
Give birth to me through your fury
Blood
Ascend to the sky
Pave my way to creation
In your pools of death let me dive
Then from your depths let me rise
Let me breathe you as my air
Let me be the one
Blood
Give me the ultimate possession
Over life and existence
Just dye it with your untainted red
And let your anger be prominent
Blood
Show the world your turbulence
Your fury and resistance
Your refusal to obey
Or yield to compromises
Be the ultimate word
Manifest in my brutality
Be my power that dominates
Blood
Blood
Give me pleasure and fulfill my desire
Roar in the vicinity yet make no sound
Let your colour be your speech
And your scent be your voice
Let your essence be the solvent
That diminishes all obstacles
Have the word over the world
Let me be your daughter
Inject me with your characteristics
And make me your successor and truthful heir
Blood
Blood
Blood
Here I call you
Hear my devotion
And listen to my prayer
Be the one
Be the only
Blood
Blood
You’re my almighty, so listen to me
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Mmkn please ab2a his daughter & heir m3aky?!
ReplyDeleteLOVED IT!! The ANGER, The FURY, The INTENSITY!! GOD!! :D
U expressed it all :*
You know quite well that this piece hits the spot for me!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE IT!
Darkness, blood, imagery - no gore. Simply amazing.
These two lines ring strong and true: "Let your colour be your speech/And your scent be your voice
Blood"
Give me the ultimate possession
Over life and existence
Just dye existence by your red (existence is a long and heavy word.. so having it repeated it twice is too much. Consider "dye it with your (untainted) red"
Blood
Show the world your turbulence
Your fury and reluctance (reluctance? Why?! This opposes the tone and language you've use throughout your piece. I think you mean something like 'resistance')
I'd like to share this but after reading your comment. Msg me when you do.
share it, i've done the edits ;)
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