Friday, 21 June 2013

The Ending of the "Zain" Phase (Goodbye Friend Across the Distant Land)

Without a name
Without a face
Without emotions
That I can erase
With pain and bitterness
In ever action he takes
The one who fixed me
Sunk deep in his disgrace

An unknown name
An unknown identity
Unknown features
An unsolved mystery
We stumbled upon each other
And we both repaired
The broken treasures
In one another
But here it ends
Here it's over
Here I say goodbye
Unwillingly
For his back, he's turned over

We were great friends
But here I say goodbye my friend
Across the distant land
And I know he will be waving back
Saying goodbye to the girl

1 comment:

  1. Nice. Different.
    'distant' not 'distanced' and I recommend removing 'who' in the last line.
    It's very nice. But I'm in the mood for this type/topic right now. But it's sadly sweet or sweetly sad. You get what I mean; I hope.

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